"Harmony" Blog Post #4 - Madison
Harmony
Darkness
Drip drop drip drop
Beads of unending anger and pain fall splattering to the ground
Drip drop drip drop 
Dozens of nameless prisoners hang from black gallows
Drip drop drip drop 
Thousands of miserable lives cry out towards the sky 
Caged men scream out for mercy
Drip drop drip drop 
Faceless oppressors shut the gates
Drip drop drip drop 
Poisonous mist spreads left and right 
Terror 
Suffering
Darkness
Peace
Drip drop drip drop 
 
I like the way you used drip drop drip drop to separate each verse. It made it sound more deep and sad.
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