"Harmony" Blog Post #4 - Madison
Harmony
Darkness
Drip drop drip drop
Beads of unending anger and pain fall splattering to the ground
Drip drop drip drop
Dozens of nameless prisoners hang from black gallows
Drip drop drip drop
Thousands of miserable lives cry out towards the sky
Caged men scream out for mercy
Drip drop drip drop
Faceless oppressors shut the gates
Drip drop drip drop
Poisonous mist spreads left and right
Terror
Suffering
Darkness
Peace
Drip drop drip drop
I like the way you used drip drop drip drop to separate each verse. It made it sound more deep and sad.
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